Wednesday, January 31, 2007

Ballad

Be with me

This is a ballad for the good timesSo put a battery in your legPut a rock beat over anythingGet it stuck there in your headYou can be with meI got nothing to rely onI've broken every boneEverybody's stop believingBut you know you're not aloneYou can be with meThis is a ballad for the good timesAnd all the dignity we hadDon't get het up on the evil thingsYou ain't coming backYou can be with meIf you want to beYou can be with me.... James Dickenson

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/be-with-me/
James Dickenson.

1 comment:

MYP ENGLISH8 said...

Casie,

This poem has a nice rhyme pattern, but it's not a ballad. Please review it and relabel.

Mrs. Basham